It is more enjoyable to work for three days with longer hours or to work in five days with shorter hours. Do you agree or disagree?
It goes without saying that in this progressive and sophisticated world where we live, human beings have been preoccupied with their careers in order to keep pace with the unforgiving economic pressure that exists in todays modernized world. In this regard, while some people prefer to work consecutively for five days with shorter working hours, other stands at the other side of the continuum, believing that working for three days in a row with longer hours is a better alternative for them. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to work for fewer days with longer hours. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, working for three days a week with longer hour, although seems difficult in the first glace, is beneficial since it provides the person with the opportunity to take advantage of their other empty days. To be more specific, when a person works only for three days, it means that he or she will enjoy the freedom of the rest of the weeks. Not only can the person engage him or herself into various activities, he or she can follow their dream and not to be restricted to their working hours. A personal example can drive this fact home. While I graduated from the university, I was being offered two types of careers. The first one was a translator vacancy at the museum, with three days working long hours, and the other was teaching English to children for five days with shorter hour. At first, it was such a dilemma for me and I was struggling to make a sound decision. Having consulted with my older brother, I chose the first job in which I had to work only three days. Although I was exhausted after three days, it was really beneficial for me since I participated in piano class which was my long-lasting dream to be a pianist. If I had chosen the job which was extended during the week, I could not have participated in the piano class and I had to sacrifice my dream for the job.
Moreover, if a person works for three days for longer hours, he or she will be more productive in his or her job. To put it in other words, when a person involves in a longer hour task, his or her mind will flourish and blossom. As a result, this mental flourishing will lead to a more productive work. As an illustration, I used to work for an entrepreneurial enterprise for more than five years. The job did not have a flexible working hour and I had to work five days a week from 7 A.M to 2 P.M. Although the time hours were short, I was wearing on with the passage of time because I was obligated to work for five consecutive days which was excruciating for me. It was at this time that I realized, my life was become routine and I cannot come up with creative ideas in my workplace. I was not as productive as I used to be when I first started working. Having changed my working hours from five days a week to three days a week, my working strategy, and working efficiency have improved drastically.
In conclusion, having the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I do believe that working three days with longer hour is much more beneficial and effective than working five days with shorter hours. It will be effective since it will lead to the productivity of the person and it also provides the opportunities for the individual to be engaged in different activities besides working.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...I had to work five days a week from 7 A.M to 2 P.M. Although the time hours were ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, really, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2752.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 606.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54125412541 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96155895361 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66471352844 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415841584158 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 855.9 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1945312887 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495091715568 0.236089414692 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163516703482 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163834637741 0.0737576698707 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.382409632685 0.150856017488 253% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472872876759 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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