Friends is a significant and inseparable part of our life, hence it is important to have a friend by oneside. In this regarding, some may prefer to keep their old friends, others think making new friends is better. Different people have various types of responses to this matter based on their personality type, characteristics, and upbringings. However, as far as I concerned, making a new friend is better than keeping an old friends due to some reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, making a new friend means starting a new relationship. As a matter of fact, people can improve their skills by meeting a strangers. There is no doubt that both the communication skill and adaptability skill ameliorate so much which is hellful for everyone. More profoundly, starting a new relationship is a good chance to show yourself. As the new friend is strange to you, it is time for showing your characteristics and performances which will impress others. For example, I moved to Japan with my family after a long time living in Vietnam. At first, I think being comfortable in a new country is difficult, especially making new friends. Contrary to my thoughts, after going to school a week, I have many new friends, all of them arekind and impressived by my Japanese which makes me become more confident.
In addition, making a new friend is a good chance to broaden one's horizon. On making a new friend, one contract with new person with new characteristics in their life.Thanks to doing that, people can acknowledge by learning new information from their life, cultures, and families. Therefore, it is undeniable that the more friends we get, the more knowledge we absorb. Importantly, knowledge is the power to succeed in any field. To clarify this point, consider how exchange students communicate with others by talking about their home country and their life. This not only help them to express their ideas but also enlarge one's knowledge about society.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that making a new friend has more advantages than keeping an old friends. This is not only the chance to have new relationship but also the chance to broaden one's horizon. Therefore, people should be more friendly to others in order to make new friends in life which is enjoyable experience.
- integrated TOEFL writing 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a stranger' or simply 'strangers'?
Suggestion: a stranger; strangers
...ple can improve their skills by meeting a strangers. There is no doubt that both the commun...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... new friend is a good chance to broaden ones horizon. On making a new friend, one co...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thanks
... with new characteristics in their life.Thanks to doing that, people can acknowledge b...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...to express their ideas but also enlarge ones knowledge about society. In conclus...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... enlarge ones knowledge about society. In conclusion, there is no doubt that ma...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tionship but also the chance to broaden ones horizon. Therefore, people should be mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, talking about, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93094629156 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91003641817 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498721227621 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6853691047 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8095238095 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47619047619 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466047828008 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143901734684 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139792756239 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313807826223 0.150856017488 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10132074197 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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