Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land? Use specific details to explain your answer.

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...est in their land to make money or trade , others prefer to use their land to impr...
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...er to use their land to improve the area . However ,as far as I concerned , I beli...
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...their land to improve the area . However ,as far as I concerned , I believe that i...
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...he area . However ,as far as I concerned , I believe that if I have a land , I wil...
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...cerned , I believe that if I have a land , I will definitely build a restaurant du...
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...y build a restaurant due to some reasons , which I will explore in the following e...
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...ch I will explore in the following essay . To begin with , the reason why I pre...
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...n the following essay . To begin with , the reason why I prefer to build a rest...
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...estaurant lays in my passion for cooking . As I was a child , I used to cook the d...
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...y passion for cooking . As I was a child , I used to cook the dinner with my mothe...
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...I used to cook the dinner with my mother . When I was older , I liked to create so...
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...dinner with my mother . When I was older , I liked to create some new dishes and l...
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...dishes and let my family member taste it . Fortunately , they all complimented me ...
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... my family member taste it . Fortunately , they all complimented me on my deliciou...
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...l complimented me on my delicious dishes . Therefore , building a restaurant gives...
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...ed me on my delicious dishes . Therefore , building a restaurant gives me a chance...
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... to cook for others which is my pleasure . Indeed , I like to combine the traditio...
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...for others which is my pleasure . Indeed , I like to combine the traditional dish ...
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...o make a different dish with great favor . In short , building a restaurant shows ...
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...fferent dish with great favor . In short , building a restaurant shows my passion ...
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...s my passion for cooking. In addition , building a restaurant is a good way to ...
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... is a good way to improve the local area . As a matter of fact , there will be mor...
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...ove the local area . As a matter of fact , there will be more job opportunities fo...
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... local people if the restaurant is built . This makes the unemployment decreases a...
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...s and improves the people's livings . More importantly , there is no doubt th...
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...people's livings . More importantly , there is no doubt that restaurant is a ...
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...t is a part of daily life of some people . In other words , most people with fast–...
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...ily life of some people . In other words , most people with fast–paced livings oft...
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...ant for meals instead of cooking at home . Thus , the demand for a restaurant in a...
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... meals instead of cooking at home . Thus , the demand for a restaurant in a area i...
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.... Thus , the demand for a restaurant in a area is very necessary . For example , ...
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...a restaurant in a area is very necessary . For example , I always have lunch at a ...
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...n a area is very necessary . For example , I always have lunch at a fast food stor...
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...hool and I have classes in the afternoon . Therefore , eating at fast food store i...
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...ave classes in the afternoon . Therefore , eating at fast food store is not only c...
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...not only convenient but also time saving . All in all , restaurant improves the ar...
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...enient but also time saving . All in all , restaurant improves the area in both it...
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...nment and its resident's daily life . In conclusion , there is no doubt t...
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...t and its resident's daily life . In conclusion , there is no doubt that b...
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...nt's daily life . In conclusion , there is no doubt that buiding a restau...
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... is one of the best choice to use a land . This not only show my passion for cooki...
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... cooking but also improve the local area . As a result , it is essential that ever...
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...lso improve the local area . As a result , it is essential that everyone realizes ...
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... wise investment to a land when owing it .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, no doubt, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71253707452 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471052631579 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.884390906 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7272727273 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.5376344086 795% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104096143733 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359413829605 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511895265497 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953874054758 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718060759712 0.0645574589148 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.