It's important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. do you agree or disagree?
I think it’s so important to keep my old friends. However for the statement, personally I believe that making new friends is as much important as keeping my old friends. I will explore my reasons in the following essay.
First, while my old friends know me the best but getting to know new people gives me the chance to get new perspectives of life with new people and their experiences. For example, I met this lady how happens to work at the same office I work and we connected immediately, eventually we became close friends. Then one day I had a big problem at work and was so frustrated and hadn’t any clue how to deal with it so this lady, my new friend worked for longer time at this office and was more experienced than me so she helped me by giving me tips and conforming me so not only she supported me like my old friends would do but also was a great help in solving this work problem
What’s more, is that I know more people who could be friends to my whole family. For instance, at parents meeting in my kids’ school I met mothers of my kids’ friends and they were nice and cool, so it was fun to invite the whole family over for dinner and birthday parties. Consequently, we the adults get our share of chatting and having fun as well as our kids who are already friends from school.
Lastly but not least, making new friends benefit my self-growth and confidence when they add to my life experience as well as feeling liked by them.
In conclusion, I believe that my old friends are as family to me and can’t be replaced but I think its crucial to socialize and make new friends with various interests and personalities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...’s so important to keep my old friends. However for the statement, personally I believe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... great help in solving this work problem What’s more, is that I know more people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, lastly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40849673203 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52424909287 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519607843137 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.768316309 48.9658058833 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.9 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7 5.45110844103 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257180551582 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126264845744 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988482298064 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172569702648 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677861823307 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.89 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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