to keep Old friends is important that to make new friends
Friends are the important part in the journey of life as they are present in every ups and downs. However, before this question I was unaware this sort of controversy exists about friends as who are important old friends or new friends. Even though, if I have to choose between this two aspects, I believe instead of doing extra things to keep your friendship alive, you have to keep moving making new friends. The reason why I believe this is based on two aspects- one increasing social network and circle as we move ahead in life and another will be learning through new prespective and insights.
As my first reason, I believe making new firends and introducing yourself to new environment grow your circle and network in your life. These days with increasing use of social networking sites and digital advertisement, the friendship is kind of advertisement that people need and are using these days. For instance, lets see a example of growing startup in any kind of businesses. The first step they choose as their advertisement is tell their firends about their startup and marketing of the products in friend circle. Then, ask them to spread these news to their firends. Consequently, it will reach to the wide audiences from my friends to their friends and continuously grow. In this scenario, having huge amount of firend and network is so important. Also, keeping up with the old friend is kind of relaxing and comfort, but this relation will never let you to explore the huge world. It doesnot mean to break relation with the old friend it just mean, not to stick inside the comfort zone, people have to rise, travel make new firend and see the world deferently. So, this idea of making new friend and exploring has some good perks than just sticking with your friend in same couch forever.
The new friendship is not only about the increase in network, but also about understanding people, their behaviour, see diferent perceptions and differences. The journey of making new friends have some down side but this side helps the person to grow in this real life. May be in the process of making new firends, you met some addicts or some sort of drug freak. In that case, you get to know the different way of life that people are living in this world, diferent preseption people have of their existence. This situation might make you proud of yourself and motivate that you are on bright side of the earth. Also, making new friend allow you to see same things from different prespective, gather ideas from variety of people. In overall, making new friends will always help you to see broad aspect of even a simple thing.
Therefore, I do not think we should just cut off old friend in the name of making new firend, rather we should just keep on increasing the firend list and never categories friendship as old friends and new friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: told
...p they choose as their advertisement is tell their firends about their startup and m...
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...friend circle. Then, ask them to spread these news to their firends. Consequently, it will...
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Message: Did you mean 'downside'?
Suggestion: downside
...journey of making new friends have some down side but this side helps the person to grow ...
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Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...e person to grow in this real life. May be in the process of making new firends, y...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...endship as old friends and new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2365.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74899598394 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47363478519 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471887550201 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4699383463 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448866077734 0.236089414692 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138792370679 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114872896465 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318273856323 0.150856017488 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554284204306 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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