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Nowadays, Languages has become a controversial topic and many debates were held to discuss it. The majority of people believe that having more than one language helps people to manage their lives. My native language which is Arabic is considered the number one language whom people find difficulties to fully acquire it. In my opinion, I believe that having more than one language is very beneficial for two main reasons.
First of all, having the ability to communicate in more than one language helps people drastically in getting a job. Most of the time, when interviewers look at the C.V that one has, they decide whether they would give the person the job or not, just based on his/her C.V. Since Arabic is the number 1 language, just having it on the C.V step up one’s chance to get the position to almost 100%. Not a long ago, a foreign friend of mine wanted to get a position in a famous traveling company which was an executive manager, and he also knew that this position is really hard to possess since many of his friends already tried that before, so I advised him to learn my language and told him that having more than one language will benefit him especially if it is a traveling company. Luckily he listened to my advice and learned the language, then when he went to the interview they approved of him getting the position with flying colors.
Secondly, language is an unlimited sea of knowledge. Learning a new language means that one would get access to cultures, traditions, tales, science, and inventions, and that does only mean one thing which is learning a language does not only mean getting the ability to communicate with other but also getting access to everything that is related to this language. In addition, if one seeks knowledge and trying to get as much information as he wants on famous pioneers, then Arabic is the key in which will take them to what they look for. Arabic is the language which most of the famous pioneers had in the era where the majority of discoveries and inventions. As a result, one would be able to look deeper into it.
To conclude, even though there are other languages which bring forth benefits to those who acquire it, Arabic is still the only language which scientists classified as the number one language which helps greatly in any field of life whether it is scientifically or practically
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, in addition, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70843373494 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55300494094 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496385542169 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.47915816 48.9658058833 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.571428571 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6428571429 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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