Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
Leaders influence others in numerous ways. Many help others with their philanthropy and wisdom. In past this world has created many great leaders who have changed the ideology for good. One of them who impacted lives of millions of people with his moral ideologies that held true to not only in that era but also today was Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi popularly known as Mahatma Gandhi.
First, he is revered as the father of the nation in India. He promoted non-violence and satyagrah (upliftment of truth) that played a crucial role to eradicate British rule from India by strategizing rallies and protests that undermined British rule in India without any physical fight. One of the most famous non-violent movements was the Dandi march, which was protest against salt tax levied by British government that affected common people. This showed the characteristics of a person who walked the talk and lead by example, millions of people not only in India but also around the globe.
Second, he instigated world peace, religious harmony and equality towards all. India is a country where people reside from different cultures and religion. His speech and love for fellow countrymen made them united towards common enemy. He helped in abolishing myth of untouchable cast by treating them as equals by giving them home in his ashram. He also penned letter to Hitler pleading to spare lives of Jews for the sake of humanity. His humble and kind nature inspires people around the world to instil these qualities.
He also tore down the British industry by promoting hand made products and persuaded people to do their own work. It boomed the local industry in India creating better economy for people.
Seldom do we see that the influence of world leaders is not only confined to the general public but the other fellow world leaders also and Mahatma Gandhi is one such exception. A man with stellar attitude towards the masses and a leader who believed that unity and truth are the weapons with which any battles can be won truly deserves utmost reverence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...rld leaders is not only confined to the general public but the other fellow world leaders also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97687861272 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43294241488 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575144508671 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7267589665 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 5.45110844103 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134222182465 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444362416043 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428790535435 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760469932926 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383613315364 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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