Automobiles like cars play a significant role in development of human society as well as in our day-to-day life. There has been no shortage of debate whether number of cars will decrease in twenty year. This can depend on a variety of factors; for example, living condition of people, cost of fuel, availability of other transportation in twenty years. Generally speaking, I believe that its better for all concerned to say that in twenty years, there will be more cars in use compared to that of today. I feel this way for several reasons which I explore in following essay.
First of all its important to consider that price of car is decreasing. Certainly, it could be possible that still some people cannot afford costly cars. However, in most countries like Dubai, India etc, few cars now a days are available at much cheaper prices and it is actually affordable by most of the people. To illustrate, even though I do not belong to an aristocratic family, my dad recently bought me a new Nano car manufactured by Tata motors which costs less than two lakh Indian Rupees. Many of my classmates own this car too. This in turn helped me to commute to college from my hostel. Many banks provide loans for cars and it can be paid on monthly basis. This makes the purchase easier.
Hence, in addition to availability of cars at cheaper price its important to consider influence of technologies like Uber and Ola in increase of cars. Of course, Uber and Ola facilities are not present at all the parts of world. However, thier customer base is growing. People now a days prefer to hire private cab for grocery shopping, commuting to office and going for trips. This is because they do not have to worry about spending money to buy car, finding parking lot, maintaining costs of cars and its very easy to book cab and get ride. This trend is increasing and Uber and Ola services are also expanding. In twenty years, there could be many more companies like Uber and as a result, there will be many more cars.
Finally, even though fuel price and maintenance costs of cars are increasing, this does not necessarily mean people will go for alternate transport. I will be the first person to admit that in twenty years there will be scarcity of petrol and diesel and atmospheric pollution will be very high compared to that of today. However, Despite these possibilities, people might continues using car. In fact, I think lack of non renewable energy source motivate the people to make use of renewable energy sources like electricity and solar energy in running cars. In addition to this, living conditions of people are increasing and they are more concerned towards living a comfortable lifestyle rather than addressing environmental problems. So, I don't think it is necessarily fair to claim that people will go for alternate transportation to address the problem of shortage of non renewable energy sources.
In summary, based on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that people will definitely continue using cars and number of cars will increase due to advancement of automobile industry and technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, hence, however, if, so, still, well, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, in fact, in summary, of course, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2594.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 536.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83955223881 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69347939554 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513059701493 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 835.2 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6645819368 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0740740741 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8518518519 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7037037037 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336153551912 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836033305734 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986523212597 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200672986039 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696315500712 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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