life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparent were children.
As time passes, our world changes accordance with human's discoveries and modifications and people find new demands in their life. In this condition, each person in order to goes through the troubles and face with these alternations has to adapt his or her behaviors to the changes in different realms specially technology according to the personality, responsibility, and traditions socially acceptable in the country. While, some people believe that the life was more convenient, others think otherwise. Personally, as far as I am concerned, I subscribe the latter one due to some important reasons, among which the astonishing growth of technology, economic development among families, and improving the educational facilities are of conspicuous consequences.
Although some people assert that technology has brought modern problems to the life and encountered young people with psychological and mental diseases in near future, it can achieve positive impacts for people's upcoming futures if they use the modern technology properly. With this in mind, with advent computers, humans can respond to their demands in an appropriated time with efficient and optimal outputs. In addition, modified transportation systems have made the transfers easy and humans can reach to their destinations without and concerning. However, in past years, our grandparents had to solve their problems through experience of hardships and putting much time.
In other point of view, elderly people faced with hardships in economical issues. They had to work in farming land from sunrise to the sunset to supply their families fundamental requirements. Furthermore, they persuade their children that have contribution in the family economic through spending their times in the factories or farming lands. In the other words, the past children and their parents perceived one thing and that is evolving themselves in one think. In contrast, with blooming industrial sections and working centers, the average salary of family enhanced surprisingly in compared to the past times. As a result, people find new opportunities in the life to achieve the prosperous situations as well as their perspectives toward the world was changed and their horizon became broad.
Last but not least, with the new development in various areas in each society, educational systems have extensively grown. Education plays a significant role in every society as far as the development of that country is concerned. In this regard, governments have broaden their supports in educational projects and allocated a great deal of their budget to this sphere every year. Consequently, young adults have less concerns about achieving to their objectives and goals in the future life and can pursue the upcoming events with convenient feeling and more tranquility, while our grandparents were deprived from using educational services, so the literacy level was low. On the other hand, statistics show that the main root of societies' dependency to the past powerful countries was that they had less awareness from their surroundings and their people pay less attentions to the governmental issues.
To sum up, with all taking into account, although people enjoyed a great intimacy and kindness in their relationships, living in past times due to lack of facilities such as communications instruments, educational and healthy centers, and transportation means, to name but a few, brought trouble situations to both families and societies and we can assert that this conditions became an appropriate opportunity to those of foreign governments to rise their power in these undeveloped countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'transfers'' or 'transfer's'?
Suggestion: transfers'; transfer's
...ed transportation systems have made the transfers easy and humans can reach to their dest...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... elderly people faced with hardships in economical issues. They had to work in farming lan...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hanged and their horizon became broad. Last but not least, with the new develop...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'broadened'.
Suggestion: broadened
...erned. In this regard, governments have broaden their supports in educational projects ...
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Line 7, column 414, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun concerns is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...y year. Consequently, young adults have less concerns about achieving to their objec...
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Line 7, column 862, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun attentions is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...their surroundings and their people pay less attentions to the governmental issues. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262560777958 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.123176661264 0.158761421928 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116693679092 0.0866891130778 135% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0291734197731 0.046263068375 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0502431118314 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131280388979 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0405186385737 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05017354809 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0388978930308 0.0309702414327 126% => OK
Particles: 0.00162074554295 0.00188951952338 86% => OK
Determiners: 0.0907617504052 0.0887237588012 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00810372771475 0.0209618222197 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0032414910859 0.0139019557991 23% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3652.0 2387.08602151 153% => OK
No of words: 560.0 408.028673835 137% => OK
Chars per words: 6.52142857143 5.86048508987 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.417857142857 0.338922669872 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.332142857143 0.251872472559 132% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.251785714286 0.174417080927 144% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.180357142857 0.112833075102 160% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05017354809 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532142857143 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 66.5888729293 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5533526081 136% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.1467961386 48.84282405 199% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.6 120.699889404 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.5533526081 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.644075263715 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 61.2142857143 45.7405998639 134% => OK
Elegance: 2.144 1.45489161554 147% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100592102441 0.300154397459 34% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111069540365 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0469198451159 0.0752933317313 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.553416278305 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148982283344 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487502762305 0.114077575197 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401152913964 0.0781384742642 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.453253660823 0.336927656856 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0835074036783 0.067059652881 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755818079405 0.210909579961 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108831967274 0.0618886996521 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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