I do not believe loyalty is the most important quality one should look for when it comes choosing a friend. Instead I would prefer honesty as an important attribute while choosing a friend.
A loyal friend will never stand against you even if you're wrong. He or she will never try to rectify your mistakes. And because of this you'll keep making same mistakes which can be hazardous for you in future. Whereas in an honest friend's company you'll be assured of doing right things in every aspect of your life. I need to be able to trust my friend and I need to believe that they're going to be honest with me. I want my friend to challenge me and make me better, and if they are too worried about appearing disloyal to me, then I don't think that friendship is healthy. If my friend blindly support me then I don't think that support would be meaningful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 52.1666666667 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 1977.66487455 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 407.700716846 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41772151899 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.48103885553 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29571541035 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 212.727598566 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651898734177 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 618.680645161 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9128106085 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5555555556 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275821366689 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116553017399 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159474329367 0.0737576698707 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315805482398 0.150856017488 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.234182912523 0.0645574589148 363% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 86.8835125448 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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