a) A major that would allow your friend to complete his or her studies and get a degree faster
(So that your friend can start working full-time soon).
b) A major that would require more years of study but is likely to lead to more and better
Employment opportunities and job offers in the future
.
We have born in the competitive world, and some of us have a lot of concerns for the future. One of the significant worries is related to the finding best job that could ensure the future. Numbers of jobs need quick training, on the other hand, many of them require more skills and knowledge. If I want choices between two statements I will select the second stance. To clarify the subject I would support my opinion with two reasons.
Frist of all, one of the important reason that justifies majors need to more studies, however, provide the best situation for working is time and make more money, in the modern society, everything comes back to the time. This means you must have more time for all of the activities in the daily life, For instance, you have enough time for working, leisure time, spend time with family. Etc., in fact, a perfect job could help people save time. Broadly speaking, my friend when graduated from the best university after 6 years, He was offered an appropriate job at a reputable company and with 7 hours in a day he earned a lot of money. At the end this, concept like a cycle and each factor have a direct effect on the others, for instance, if you have the best job, you earn more money and you don’t work plenty of time.
Second, Many academic disciplines require more studies to put in the general world, when a person graduates from these fields carry a lot of knowledge, in fact, knowledge another reason that needs to meticulous attention. Going to depths, Knowledge means a person who has the major ability to solving problems. To elucidate on, if you are an engineer without hesitating you must be excellent in some fields, for instance, physic, math, and chemistry. According to statistical research, most of the best engineers around the word studied in the best universities and have a lot of literacy. Furthermore, knowledge, literacy and skills give you a chance of finding the best job. And the best job stable your status in society.
Conclusion, in general, there are two ways for working, one of them is spending less time in the university or college then get a degree faster and working full time, on the contrary, chose a major that should spend more time for learning, between two states I highly recommend the second mode. And I provided two reasons including time and knowledge.
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- Some young people have free time in the evenings after school or on days off from school. Which of the following activities would be most beneficial for young people (ages 14-18) to do in their spare time? Why? a. Gaining practical work experience either 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...them require more skills and knowledge. If I want choices between two statements I...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...best job stable your status in society. Conclusion, in general, there are two wa...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
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...o reasons including time and knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, broadly speaking, for instance, in fact, in general, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73236009732 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5214358135 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.247484465 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.055555556 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175603629942 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496759225551 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454230507617 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104253145258 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371505296406 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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