in the name of god
According to the article, in many companies, one of the best ways to approaches to the project is creating gropes. And provides some reasons until supported this idea . However, the lecturer contradicts this idea by mentioning some major points around a topic.
Frist of all, the reading states that. Collecting groups is so beneficial, because this means, a wider range of knowledge, tactics, and skills. On the contrary the, the professor refutes this point. And he asserts that in some gropes, a few members don contribute in the grope in addition. some members work more and more. And you could not a recognition that each one working or not.
Second, the article explains, that when some persons works together as a group, the group work very fast and could solve the problem, in addition, making a decision is easy. While, the speaker rejects this idea, and he claims, working as a group not so fast because many times the group needs to meet for solving problems. In fact, meeting needs more times.
Lust but not least, the assignment said that taking grope is very rewarding for members. On the other hand, lecturer denies this concept and he illustrates, in some groups there are one or two people get a decision for all of the members, and they want to convince another person that their ideas are correct. In this situation, some of the people in the group don’t have the excellent mode.
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- in the name of god 3
- company 3
- a) A major that would allow your friend to complete his or her studies and get a degree faster(So that your friend can start working full-time soon).b) A major that would require more years of study but is likely to lead to more and betterEmployment oppor 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s some reasons until supported this idea . However, the lecturer contradicts this ...
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...ng states that. Collecting groups is so beneficial, because this means, a wider...
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...ecting groups is so beneficial, because this means, a wider range of knowledge, ...
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...e, tactics, and skills. On the contrary the, the professor refutes this point. And h...
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... gropes, a few members don contribute in the grope in addition. some members work...
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...n contribute in the grope in addition. some members work more and more. And you co...
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...some members work more and more. And you could not a recognition that each one wo...
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...r ideas are correct. In this situation, some of the people in the group don't have the...
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...oup don't have the excellent mode.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, second, so, while, in addition, in fact, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 242.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44917860559 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.9957263201 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7333333333 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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