Decision making has been paid attention in these years in an unbelievable growth. We see many tools and methods contributing with knowledge in defining this process better and effectively. Some researchers say this is a process we should consider it logically and some say it is an emotional activity and on the other hand some essays suggest decisions should be taken solely and in contradiction many believe it should be with group. I agree with the statement which says before making a decision it is important to find out if the decision will be popular with others.
First of all, there is a famous quote that says if you want be successful you should be the similar color of society. You should be in consensus with the other people to handle your problems easily or conduct your programs you had planned. Also many projects in social science indicate seventy percent of high level managers have more networking ability in comparison with skills. There are all reasons that show decision makers should see how much their intention is accepted by the others to make good relationship with them. For example a manager want to establish a sport center for company and get consultation from his colleagues which devices is better for this center, however they say wrong expensive apparatus he will buy them to increase his connection with them.
Secondly, decision must be taken based on some factors like experience, knowledge, financial analysis. There are many methods for efficient decision making in many scientific subjects particularly in management which use agreement of bunch of persons. This cause the purpose would be more valuable because experience and knowledge of other humans have been involved in this procedure. For example in marketing field there is a standard questionnaire for gathering opinion of others and then evaluate them to reach a proper conclusion about which advertising concept is more appropriate.
Finally, there is an issue in psychology which say people have resistance with any new decision and the solution to make them cooperated with us is check the popularity of our judgments. It could be happen in any environment including families, governments, organizations or sport teams and if you want break the opposition people should feel they had have a role in producing the decision. For instance a father when wants take his children to a place he ask them where they want to go because if they did not like there they would not object because it has been selected by themselves.
In conclusion, however like many discussions it has negative comments about our subject but in overall view by analyzing feedback makes them more acceptable and reduce objection against them which is recommended in all communities.
- TPO-34 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.U 76
- Some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence in young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your position. 83
- TPO-45 Integrated Writing Task 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life. Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... conduct your programs you had planned. Also many projects in social science indicat...
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Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... opposition people should feel they had have a role in producing the decision. For i...
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Line 7, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cing the decision. For instance a father when wants take his children to a place ...
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Line 7, column 458, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
...n wants take his children to a place he ask them where they want to go because if t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10792951542 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78017984122 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539647577093 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4450778803 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.411764706 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7058823529 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343627134122 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121298250394 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15900261626 0.0737576698707 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182239962215 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140701698302 0.0645574589148 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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