Making decision on by own or by consulting with other.
A philosopher, whose name allude me at this moment, once said, “The life of people are built on the basis of their decisions.” As we condemn the independency of ourselves from our parents, we are faced with a battle which is named important decision. In some choices, we are walking on a red line which may even results in the end of our life. So, the decisions we make play a vital role in our life and create our personality, prosperous, characteristic, and so on. However this factor is vividly important for everyone, some stubborn people might make their decision by their own and without consulting with others. I, personally, prefer to get help from others which I have trusted to them for the following reasons.
First of all, consulting with others could be conducive to see the problem of a decision in every side. In my view, a person always solve his/her problems in a similar way. By consolation, the person can be familiar with other aspects of the problem because people do not see the problems as the same way. The result of this procedure is that we diminish the risk of failure in making a decision. Also, we use from the experience of other people who may had gotten stuck in the same situation and became injured or victor on that decision. Furthermore, we get rid of our prejudice of the belief to something by view our problems and also a decision in the eyes of others. It help us to broaden our view of life and leave the prisoned life which we made lonely. So, getting some advice from our friends provides an opportunity to change our view point to a decision and make a better decision.
Secondly, if we get help and advice from others, the stress and the pressure that we feel will decrease. In a tough decisions we may feel frustration in the middle stage of that. If we make a decision lonely, we cannot find a way to be calm. On the other hand, by receiving consult from others at the first step of a hard decision, there is always a person who feels empathy about ourselves, someone who listen to your concern and thinks with you to find a way to throw away the problem. This kind of compassion releases the stress of the hard time moments. Furthermore, our friends can trust in ourselves and they will get our advice for their problems which leads to build a long lasting mutual friendship. Therefore, getting advice in the tough decision results in less stressful moment and reduction of the pressure we feel.
To sum up, I refer to a proverb which said, “Two brains could help you to take a better decision.” Axiomatically, no one can think ideally and always there are some voids in our decision which can’t be seen except in other’s eyes. In addition, an essential aspect of a decision is who we deal with the hard times which we encounter to them. Being with a friends at first to end is a kind of releasing the stress and pressure of that moment. This two reason is enough for me to consult with others in the making a decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 478, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... prosperous, characteristic, and so on. However this factor is vividly important for ev...
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Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... a person always solve his/her problems in a similar way. By consolation, the person can be fami...
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Line 2, column 675, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...so a decision in the eyes of others. It help us to broaden our view of life and leav...
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Line 4, column 372, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a friend' or simply 'friends'?
Suggestion: a friend; friends
... which we encounter to them. Being with a friends at first to end is a kind of releasing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, kind of, first of all, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2463.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56111111111 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65198828017 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457407407407 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.402036701 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.85842293907 389% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285082196087 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924266042452 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957098463985 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204082339873 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029415864915 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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