Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visitmuseums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit
museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

When people travel to new places, they often choose the local museums as a must-see place.
Sometimes the museums are even more attractive than the most famous place of interest. This
phenomenon can be easily explained if the function of museums is taken into account. As we
have known, museums can help us know the history, the customs and the most representative
products of that place.

Different place has different history. And the most convenient way to know the history is to visit
the local museum. Last year when I traveled to Xi’an, an old city, I went to the history museum to
explore the course of its development. With the background knowledge provided by the museum,
I found that it was easier for me to understand the city. So the museum can clear away the barriers
between tourists and the city by making them familiar with its history. To a tourist, the most
attractive part of a place is usually its customs, which can be demonstrated by the local museum.
In the Beijing custom museum, the real life of typical Beijingers is vividly shown. A tourist can
satisfy his curiosity by knowing the origin and characteristics of the quart-yard, the most classical
building in Beijing. With the help of museums, tourists can have a deeper understanding of the life
of local people.

Every place has its own representative products, which are usually handcrafts. Tourists can have
the access to a wonderful show of these handcrafts in the local museum. For example, in Jingde
town, the most famous pottery-making place in China, tourists can be excited by the beautiful
pottery products and the complicated making process exhibited in the pottery museum. It will be a
pity for a tourist not to experience the wonderful show of the local products in the museum.

In a word, museums serve as a bridge between tourists and the place they travel to. That is why
people are so eager to visit museums when they travel to new places

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 56, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'an'?
...m. Last year when I traveled to Xi'an, an old city, I went to the history muse...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94311377246 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74284344188 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473053892216 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5932712326 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8947368421 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.45110844103 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.53405017921 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159446221476 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666414044085 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102057428171 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604410818964 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947409545627 0.0645574589148 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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