Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes. On the other hand, some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities. If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced, would you support or oppose its construction? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
A big building as a shopping center would provide us a lot of benefits, not only for me but for my neighborhood and even my city. This construction would afford more jobs, options to buy things and hangout with friends and family.
The number of unemployed people are increasing in my city and today achieved the highest level of the last 5 years. Unfortunately, I am one of those but hopefully with this new construction will offer a lot of new jobs. I have been looking for a job for almost a year, I have friends that is waiting for more than that. Actually, many people was thinking about move to the city, because some of then do not have even a minimum wage to survive. Fortunately, all the citizens of Polur will considering to remain in our amazing city.
In addition, Polur is an inner city, we do not have many options to go shopping. Currently, when we need to buy something, we need to travel almost 5 hours to another city nearby that have a shopping center. However, if we would have a shopping center here, would be so much comfortable. Such as we are promoting the growing of Polur.
Last but not least, we would have fun by going to the movies because there are not cinema in Polur. Nowadays, it is almost impossible to find a city without a cinema. Also, we would playing games with friends and family, eating a different taste of food in food court. I can not even imagine who would not like! Everyone will enjoy about this construction.
For those reasons, I feel that building a shopping mall nearby will provide a big advance for my inner city. Everyone will love, for sure!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering remaining'.
Suggestion: considering remaining
...unately, all the citizens of Polur will considering to remain in our amazing city. In addition...
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Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'consider'
Suggestion: consider
...unately, all the citizens of Polur will considering to remain in our amazing city. I...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sidering to remain in our amazing city. In addition, Polur is an inner city, we ...
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Line 9, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... we are promoting the growing of Polur. Last but not least, we would have fun by...
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Line 13, column 183, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'play'
Suggestion: play
...a city without a cinema. Also, we would playing games with friends and family, eating a...
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Line 17, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ner city. Everyone will love, for sure!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, so, then, i feel, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55821917808 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54441453346 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3031304464 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2941176471 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123028269437 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406804464251 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371826305263 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706189042067 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032829459249 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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