Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really look.
When it comes to advertisements, many people claim that products do look as good as advertisements’ mention. In fact, in order to persuade consumers to buy their products, many advertisements make products better and more tempting than the real ones.
The advertisement is one of marketing methods. To make it extraordinarily effective, designers have no choice but to exaggerate its meaning. For example, while designing advertisements, food companies will take full use of some skills to make their food look more delicious. Hence, people, especially foodies, are easily attracted by these fancy images and then go to have a try. In reality, most dishes in the restaurants are not similar to the advertisement and even do not taste good.
One of purposes of advertisements is to spread its farm and to make people familiar with its product. The more unique and conspicuous the advertisements, the more mindful people will be. When we are reading magazines and watching television, our attention is possibly paid on those distinct images whose most part is advertisements. If we saw the same advertisements again and again, we would keep them in mind and even buy them. As a result, a wide range of companies’ products are familiar to people.
Advertisements are the main driving force behind enlarging brand awareness. Repeating the same pictures on the television or other kind of medias, which enable consumers to raise products’ brand recognition. If the advertisements made products look as the same as the original ones, for most products whose look is relatively common but quality is reliable, they would tempt fewer consumers.
In a conclusion, even if most advertisements make their products different from what they really look, it is reasonable and acceptable. Companies just expect to take advantage to advertisements to attract people and ultimately improve their profit and reputation.
- It is better to learn from coworkers and friends than to learn from teachers and supervisors. 85
- READING 3
- Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really look. 76
- The best way for a good future is to plan carefully when you are young 37
- Renewable sources of energy will soon replace fossil fuels. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, really, so, then, while, for example, in fact, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35313531353 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3641551205 2.67179642975 126% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9007977902 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4117647059 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35075274378 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102981468595 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100022299159 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201868283135 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690572577655 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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