movies and television programs should present stories where good people are rewarded and bad people are punished.
Watching movies or television programs could always be a precious thing for me especially in the busy world since it provides me with some private time to escape from the reality. Concerning the storyline and the result of the character, some people believe that it’ll better if good people are not always rewarded, however, I strongly hold that good people are rewarded and bad people should be punished.
To start with, happy endings are more relaxing to watch. Compared with bad-ending stories, a movie with a happy ending could be more pleased with for most people who initially want to watch something for fun. When they know that in the story, good characters are always rewarded and bad characters could never live a fine life, they are more able to treat the time as a stress reliever and enjoy the movie or television program without mental pressure.
Additionally, a story like this is good for education. Movies and television programs could be meaningful in education. Especially in a society that no one is unfamiliar with TV shows or dramas, they are not merely entertainment but also could do good to the education of children. In cartoons watched by children, if the virtuous character saved others’ lives while being punished, children might avoid doing virtuous things in their real life. For example, nearly every child in China knows a person named Lei Feng, who contributes his own life to helping people in trouble. Even though he died, his name is still praised by almost everyone until now, and his families are also be treated as heroes because of him. Lei Feng is a great model in the story and children are willing to do good things in order to imitate him.
Of course, I should admit that sometimes it’ll be a little bit boring if the ending could be predicted all the time. However, there are some other ways to solve the problem by setting some reverses during the story line. Such as the good person actually is a spy and all the incidents that seemed to happen accidentally indeed were deliberately done by him. I remember I once watched a detective movie and of course the murderer was arrested in the end. Even I know that it could happen like this, the story is not anything boring at all, providing various perspectives from different characters and even trying to create another fake “truth” in the middle of the movie.
In a nutshell, I maintain that movies and television programs are better with storylines that heroes have what they deserve while bad characters end up in misery. Because it is relaxing to watch and has significance in education, also, could be interesting as well if the stories are good enough.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... should admit that sometimes it’ll be a little bit boring if the ending could be predicted...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to while'
Suggestion: to while
...ines that heroes have what they deserve while bad characters end up in misery. Becaus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, still, well, while, for example, of course, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83660130719 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56002317474 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522875816993 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9055500861 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.842105263 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1578947368 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274510533041 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829975477578 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087154012479 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174087747549 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092497405102 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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