National governments can take a variety of actions to help protect the natural environment. Which ONE of the following three actions do you think is MOST important for a nation's government to take to protect the natural environment and why?
- Fund research to develop environmentally friendly energy sources such as solar or wind power
- Preserve natural places such as forests and protect native wildlife species(animals) that live there
- Pass and enforce laws to prevent the pollution of air and water by big companies and industries.
Nowadays, although we have witnessed the unprecedented accumulation of material affluence, we have also been suffering from pollution and other environmental issues caused by high-speeding industrialization. Solutions to these problems are underway to address, led by the government. At this moment, general controversy arises. Some people contend that it is more helpful to develop cutting-edge technology and new energy sources to conserve the environment, while others hold a reverse viewpoint that the government ought to push the enaction and implementation of laws related to the environment. As far as I am concerned, preserving natural places and wildlife species should play a more critical role in the process.
In the first place, the conservation of natural places such as forests and animals can efficiently exert beneficial effects on the environment in a long term. As we all know, with the pervasiveness of greenhouse effects and urban heat islands effects, we should attach greater importance to plants and shrubs. They are capable of absorbing carbon dioxide emitted by factories and vehicles. What's more, they are also of great importance to reduce the soil loss rate and can accelerate the cycle of both water and air. Besides, wildlife like some endangered animals can maintain biodiversity and gene diversity. Without them, our human beings will not only possess an unstable environment, and even lose some critical genes that may deliver benefits to the development of medicine and sanitation system.
In addition, protecting some wild places and wild animals can facilitate the education of the masses. Most time, people do not have a comprehensive understanding of the environment where they live. Visiting the places that have been preserved, people are granted some chances to have some direct contact with the wildlife and are enabled to grasp a clearer view of nature. Moreover, these environmentally friendly practices can not only awaken the consciousness of protecting the environment but also can reinforce their awareness of taking actual actions to preserve our nature. Take me as an example. Last week, I went to a wildlife conservation area with my friends. Not only we enjoyed the accompany of wild animals and plants, but also, we enriched our knowledge of the meaning of protecting them. Finally, we decided to contribute to the project, donating our money and doing some volunteer activities.
Admittedly, allocating money for research aimed at developing renewable energy sources and enforcing laws also function well sometimes. Environmentally friendly energy can directly reduce the exhaust and emission of greenhouse gases and toxic gases, and environment-related law can forcibly reduce the release of pollution to some extent. But it is also unavoidable that both practices cost a vast amount of time, money, and energy, and they cannot prompt people to change their behaviors enormously from the bottom of their hearts.
In a nutshell, protecting natural places and wildlife species is supposed to be emphasized in the process of protecting the Earth, the hometown of all human beings. If we want to safeguard the green planet, what we should pay more attention to is the creatures it has already proliferated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, as for, in addition, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2761.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 510.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4137254902 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0934596333 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550980392157 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 881.1 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1641445251 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.041666667 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156816495357 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415205257668 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479378169355 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811028752213 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375294653006 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 160.0 86.8835125448 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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