Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor?
some sociologists believe that “the best way for better living are peace and love. In fact, try to live in the best places in your city or hometown.” it means that try to change your live and enjoy that and I prefer to have some neighbors with some characteristics. first of all, people should chose or buy their neighbors it means the best qualities of a good neighbors are trustful, close friends and in my opinion rich. but, the most important quality is trustful. so, I don’t like the other kinds of neighbors. however, I have some reasons for my opinions about a good neighbors.
first of all, I love to discuss about the trustful neighbors. The most important quality of neighbors are confidential. they should know how to deal with other people like. respect for family persons like women and children. For instance, we have some neighbors and they know us for a long time and we trust them even they keep our children for more than ten hours and keep watching our home for few days, when we are in trip. so, I love this kinds of neighbors they are respectable.
Second, I like to discuss about a neighbor that is like my close friend. In fact, they are our close friend of my family. family of Joan, they are like angels. so, they behave with our neighbor like family members and I prod them. however, I love them and they don’t love to fight, shrike or talk aloud with their neighbors. so, I love to live near some other neighbors with characteristics like joan’s family they are the best. also, I like all people have the same neighbors like joan’s family. so, people can call them lucky persons.
Third, in my opinion people should have rich neighbors. On the other hand, I don’t like to disrespect for poor neighbors. so, I try to explain one by one. first, rich neighbors have some good characteristics like reputation, honor, and luxury life. so, it is good idea, if people have the same neighbors with these characteristics. but, if they have poor neighbors with characteristics like. trustful, full educated and respectful I, also love neighbors. however, I prefer to a have rich neighbors.
To summarize, Greek people has a proverb that says “people should try to buy the neighbors not the house” it means that neighbors are the most important thing in our life. so, in my opinion the qualities of a good neighbors are trustful, close friends and rich. so, I love neighbors with these characteristics. however, I don’t disrespect for the other kinds of neighbors they are just my opinion about a good neighbors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, for instance, in fact, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84529147982 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80299639587 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.367713004484 0.524837075471 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6484423942 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.53125 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9375 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71875 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 29.0 11.8709677419 244% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292386535531 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929357242676 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862217218618 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205549352113 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831806937775 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.87 8.01818996416 73% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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