Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?
someone who is quiet
someone who we are similar to
someone who is supportive
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Neighbors are with us every time and in my opinion the best one is who is supportive as I will discuss in this article.
First of all, being supportive is an excellent quality that a neighbor can have. He can help us during our most difficult time in life. The help may come through many ways as the most crucial as advise. For instance, a few years ago I lost my marriage and got fire from the job. After listening my neighbor's advise, I mended the marriage and got hired in another job. Thus, this illustrates how important is to have a supportive neighbor.
Moreover, we can count on them whenever is necessary. For example, every time that I went on vacation I had to communicate my neighbor to spy on my house every once in a while because of thieves. As he was very supportive he helped me and I procured to travel in peace. Therefore, this other example shows us that without such a neighbor, it would not be possible to travel for fun.
Finally, I strongly believe that having a very supportive neighbor allows us not to loose marriage and jobs and helps us taking care of our houses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ry supportive neighbor allows us not to loose marriage and jobs and helps us taking c...
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Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to take' or 'take'.
Suggestion: to take; take
...to loose marriage and jobs and helps us taking care of our houses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, moreover, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 1977.66487455 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42574257426 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5469034117 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59900990099 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 618.680645161 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8675485835 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175952816163 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652771410411 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639826078116 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12774199613 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618537719598 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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