Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?
someone who is quiet
someone who we are similar to
someone who is supportive
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Not only do neighbors live near us but sometimes they may become our best friend. And I personally enjoy ones who are quiet, as I will talk over in the following paragraphs.
First of all, as I am taking English test, I need silence. Then, no one around me may be rowdiness, otherwise it becomes convoluted to concentrate. Therefore, having a quiet neighborhood should be ideal in my situation. For instance, not merely me but anyone who needs to be in a quiet place should have silence, on the other hand they will not be able to pass their examinations.
Moreover, as mentioned above, I study during the night and sleep during the day. During my sleep hours, silence once again is necessary for me. Thus, having quiet neighbors would be the best way for living. For example, one of my friends used to work during the night and had only morning and/or afternoon sleeping hours like me. Unfortunately, one of his neighbor was rowdy. Then, he had to move to a new house in order to avert such a terrible neighbor.
Finally, to have quiet neighbors brings peace to the entirely community and nobody is affected by terrible neighbors.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 200.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.675 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66439017413 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 618.680645161 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0175491078 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9230769231 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164896417339 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583295817576 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514152275226 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110520348964 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535328982226 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 86.8835125448 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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