Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past
Good health comes from the kind of food that we eat in our everyday diet or better saying the consumption of necessary nutrients for our body. Some people may say that in the past they had a better health. However, others think otherwise. They believe that it is easier to keep up the good health based on technologies advancements. It is also agreeable that is easier to maintain the health in a good stated through organic food.
Firstly, in the past we did not have gyms to go to work out. There were no other alternatives to exercise except only through walking. But, currently, we have not only parks but gyms spread all around the world. We also have nutrients found in supplements. For instance, in every gym in my country after finishing the training they give us such supplements to complement our dairy diet. Then, it makes me feel strong enough to accomplish my further tasks.
Secondly, we can grow our own food. Sowing organic vegetables is one of the best way to keep away from parasites, needless to mention about agrotoxic which razes our body.
However, in the past people used to have a very soft life. It was not like it is today an amok life. nowadays what we are facing it is wholeheartedly a state of chaos. We do not have time to do leisure activities. All that we have to do is only work. Even after having finishing working at the office we still keep ou duties up at home. Some people do not stop working even during the weekend. Therefore, what it was supposed to do in the office it was made in there nothing else.
Finally, with all the technology advancements that we have today and with the further advancements which are supposed to come up our health will likely be easily maintained and we will be able produce our food with high quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
... was not like it is today an amok life. nowadays what we are facing it is wholeheartedly...
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Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s. All that we have to do is only work. Even after having finishing working at the office ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53582554517 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51736142213 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8134102199 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1818181818 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5909090909 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161981840182 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480491369212 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823835472239 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875629874618 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118019135308 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.