Your city is trying to construct a new building in order to attract more tourists Which do you think would be the best tourist attraction A historical museum A shopping mall An indoor amusement park Use specific reasons and examples to support you answer

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Your city is trying to construct a new building in order to attract more tourists. Which do you think would be the best tourist attraction?
A historical museum
A shopping mall
An indoor amusement park
Use specific reasons and examples to support you answer.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: there
...g to a museum because I am certain that there there will be thousands of works related to t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...ts from the past and many people can be interest in those papers. For instance, when I w...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61918604651 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54313616948 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476744186047 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2504272026 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 5.45110844103 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23905592222 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946681189408 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702722152385 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144313380055 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091973494361 0.0645574589148 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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