Your city is trying to construct a new building in order to attract more tourists. Which do you think would be the best tourist attraction?
A historical museum
A shopping mall
An indoor amusement park
Use specific reasons and examples to support you answer.
Some people believe that developing an indoor amusement park would attract more tourists to their city. Others think that a shopping mall would be the best option for tourism. In my opinion, a historical museum would certainly be the best option for tourism due to the following reasons to be discussed in this article.
First of all, the best way to know the history of the place we are visiting is by visiting museum. In museums we are going to find many papers, squares, and other souvenirs portraiting the history of the city. For example, when I am coming by a new city, my first goal is going to a museum because I am certain that there there will be thousands of works related to the city as a whole. Thus, this example illustrates the importance of a museum as a kind of attraction to the city.
Moreover, a historical museum may contain original work from scientists from the past and many people can be interest in those papers. For instance, when I was in Italy and France, I visited Vaticano and Louvre's museums because I was told that in those places there were thousands of papers from scientists like Isaac Newton and as I needed them I had to visit those museums. Therefore, this shows one more time the necessity of building a historical place in my city.
Furthermore, a museum would goad people stimulus for old artifacts because there are many people who enjoy collecting old souvenirs and would love to expose theirs in the museum. As one instance of it, my father is an old collection and tries to show what he has in a museum but, he does not have the opportunity to do so because there are no museums nearby my house. Then, that elucidates the desideratum of having a museum near my house.
Finally, I strongly believe that building a historical museum near my house would bring more tourists because of original papers from scientists from the past, collection and we would find the history of the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61918604651 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54313616948 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476744186047 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2504272026 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 5.45110844103 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23905592222 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946681189408 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702722152385 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144313380055 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091973494361 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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