Nowadays many high schools and universities require students to work on projects in groups, and all members of the group receive the same grade (mark) on the project. Do you agree or disagree that giving every member of a group the same grade is a good way to evaluate students?
it is critically important to analyse students individually. I personally believe that university should give different grades to the student working in a group to complete a project. I feel this way for 2 reasons that I will explain in this essay:
First of all, there are some students in the group who are just depend on the highly creative person. To be more specific, they rely on the ideas and thoughts of the one who are actively preparing and diligently working on the project. Consequently, this affects the performance of all the members in the group. For instance, when I was in a sophomore year, me and my colleagues were assigned a biology project. our group consisted of eight members. Everyone in the group were trying their best to prepare a wonderful project. But there were these two colleagues who were not contributing at all and just doing their own stuff. As a result, our project was not upto the mark and received unexpected low grade.
Secondly, evaluating students based on their creativity and efforts demonstrates which students is brilliant in the group. Also, it
shows
which member in the group works hard and give their best to complete a project. my own experience is the compelling example of this, when I was in a final year, we were assigned project on one of the topics in biochemistry. we were told that grade will be given as per individual performance and will be added to the final assesment. I tried hard and researched about the topic in very detail. However, my colleagues, on the other hand, did not spend much time in researching. As a result, I was graded good score than my colleagues and was able to
show
to my professors that I really worked hard in doing the project.
Overall, in my opinion, university should not grade every student same when they work on a particular group project. this is because the outcome is unsatisfactory and the performance of the individual student is not observed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80473372781 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81485826479 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491124260355 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4626356706 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4736842105 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21052631579 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376105253571 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118008095308 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102466641326 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19864326661 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690662184799 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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