Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex,it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Most people believe nowadays the life of every individual has become busier than before. this is because of various factors like too much workload, health issues, etc., that has led to complex lifestyle. I personally believe that it is critically important for young generation to plan everything so that they give equal time to all the necessary task and activities which are essential in their daily lives. I feel this way for two reasons; that I will explore in this essay:
First of all, planning is an important aspect to perform day to day task. Today, young people have many things to do; for example, they have lot of studies, assignment, projects and other related activities which are very much important for their academic progress. they spend too much time on studies that they are unable to take out time for other activities like socializing or exercising. exercising daily, makes body fit and energetic so that they can focus on every task; socializing can make their communication growth. so young people need to plan and organize so that they can perform every task of the day. For instance, when i was a university student, i did not have time for other social activities. As a result, I started feeling low and was in mental distress for few months. I shared my problems with my parents, they told me to make a daily schedule that includes my daily routine and even i was told to add exercise and sports to my schedule. I followed the schedule daily and still following. Now I am living a happy life without any complexity or mental distress.
Second, when young people have the ability to plan and organise things, they kind of follow success in short time. because, they know there is too much workload in this modern life. my own experience is compelling example of this, when i was in my final year i had planned and organized every single task of the day. without any stress or pressure I was able to complete my degree with an excellent score. As a result, i got placed in a very big organization that I always dreamed of.
Overall, in my opinion, it is very crucial for young people to plan and frame things in this modern and complex world. this is because they can perform all the task daily and have a successful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in short, kind of, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65664160401 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50481160828 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6756684026 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.95 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267275245422 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859188616062 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638348810431 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192059522402 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045375458074 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.