Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?
These days, many people resort to having their own business due to the economic situation and work conditions. Companies may not appropriate for people under financial burden. However, an organization is a place that exerts lessen danger for forced labor. This essay examines the disadvantage of self-employee and why one tries to run their own business.
In the first step, companies may not play successful actions to fulfill the people's demands from the economic aspect. The way of explanation, the costs of living are expensive. The only way to escape from this problem is that the cost of human resources and equipment should be modified by reducing the extra financial burden. Besides, the job position has been considered a temporary opportunity for applicants. Nonetheless, it is adapted by people to satisfy their life. The rout this problem is stemmed from by the official government. If the government had adopted a decisive role to support the companies, people would not have established their companies. Inconsequent, one of the problems for companies is the cost of living of people.
Additionally, many problems have been risen by running the business with people. Because it should have a clear business plan for the people how their many should be invested correctly. Furthermore, a successful business attains many benefits for people, if expert plans a clear business plan. For instance, in London, many startups are bankrupts by people, which is not apparently managed by officials. Also, a considerable percent of financial resources are wasted for filing the problem. Consequently, it should be handled carefully for founding an organization that is counted as its own business.
As a result, many companies should be responsible for people's demands. And this fact imposes the managers to fire the employee. But people tremendously think of having a self-employed job, and it can be counted as a permanent job for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26366559486 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97167349377 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530546623794 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4452277755 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9523809524 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8095238095 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290405244314 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815588862961 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754798287189 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197177246648 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893629350571 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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