“Often we are asked to collaborate in team projects at events, school, and even work. Sometimes we are required to work with a group of people who share our opinions and ideas. However, sometimes we need to work with groups of people who have entirely different opinions then us.”
Which do you prefer? Use reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples.”
Working in team is an ubiquitous necessity and reality all over the world and in all fields of works or activities. It is also an special ability common not only in human specie but also in animal species, when they related with each other to obtain advantage or not. I prefer to work with a group with the same points view. I feel this way for the following reasons.
Firstly, when a work is done by a team that share opinions less stress is generated. This is because people agree in many aspects of how they should perform their work, therefore, will be a reduction in discussions and misunderstandings. Moreover, a peaceful and enjoyable environment is generated. For example, many companies use the strategy of divide their employees into teams that share close personalities, thoughts and believes to guarantee that more work will be done with a decline of disagreements.
Secondly, working with a group who agrees with each other will decline the time wasted looking for an agreement of ideas. In other words, the work will be done quickly since the team have common sense. Although may occur some disparate ideas, because it is expected that different people may present controversial believes sometimes, the group will solve the situation by choosing the best approach as they share the same mission and vision.
Finally, the results reached by team will be increased. A focused group of people that share and concentrate their efforts in the same direction will achieve their goals. A group of people who direct their energy in a random way, however, will hardly obtain their expected results. For instance, in a school group of students that are together to create a science project if they since the beginning trace a strategy of what and how to do their project they will certainly obtain a good grade and reach the expected result with the experiment.
To sum up, I prefer to work with a team that share my opinions. This is because it is less stressful, we will lose few time discording with others and the results will be increased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Working in team is an ubiquitous necessity and reality all ov...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...elds of works or activities. It is also an special ability common not only in huma...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'believes'.
Suggestion: sometimes believes
...ferent people may present controversial believes sometimes, the group will solve the situation by ...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...ferent people may present controversial believes sometimes, the group will solve the sit...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a random way" with adverb for "random"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...group of people who direct their energy in a random way, however, will hardly obtain their expe...
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Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...ause it is less stressful, we will lose few time discording with others and the results ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86079545455 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65766855656 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502840909091 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4041794001 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.647058824 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 5.45110844103 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298731142834 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104331130732 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685539436382 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176139014993 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026498263552 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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