Often, we are required to participate in group projects at school or work. Sometimes we must work with the people who share our opinions and ideas However, sometimes we must work with the people who have completely different opinions than us. Which option do you prefer? Use reasons and example in your answer.
Group projects are important to improve various skills in our lives. It helps people to improvise numerous soft skills and team building skill. Some people believe that for group project they should work with the people who do not share the same ideas; others disagree. According to me, for group project people who share the same opinion or ideas should work as a team for few reasons; such as, the same opinion helps to solve problems quickly and accurately. I will elaborate on my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, when people work as a team, they not only become more invested in the project, but they also become devoted to each other. Team members support each other and adopt each other’s working styles. The team relationship may result in trustworthy friendship. That leads to offering a hand on other assignments and sharing ideas or brainstorms to push one another along to reach personal and professional goals. For example, when I was working as a PT in India, I got an assignment to take an assessment of patients at free camp. In that camp, I had to work with other newly joined PT, but we were having the same ideas to work as a team to take an assessment of all patients. So, we were able to complete all patients’ assessments on time.
Second, another key advantage of group work in the office is that it can increase efficiency. When a group attacks a project or task, they tend to get more work done than if an individual took on that task without any support. A group approach can also lead to cost savings for your business because it can increase productivity without requiring you to hire more employees. Group work also helps your business meet individual and team goals more quickly because more people are committed to each project. That would be possible when all team members agree with each other’s ideas; if not then project work takes more time than predicted and sometimes project get postponed as well. For instance, in PT school I got an assignment to work on but my team was not able to come to any conclusion of on which topic we should present assignment. And we end up missing our due date of submitting our assignment.
In conclusion, group work is the essence of learning various soft skills and team building skills, but I believe that it only possible when a person has team members who share the same ideas and opinions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... share the same ideas; others disagree. According to me, for group project people who share the...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... who share the same ideas and opinions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73269689737 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58363556486 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477326968974 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.135462776 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.15 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329016907155 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995023138815 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690686099347 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199219746942 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539579432802 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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