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One should never burrow money from a friend, this is not good for their relationship.

People constantly over estimate the depth of relationships when money enters into equation. Many people may debate this point, arguing that true friendship should be strong enough to withstand any undue influence. However, as people are becoming more self-centered, I believe that borrowing money from a friend can only harm or irrevocably damage a friendship. That’s why I believe this is a bad idea and I have mainly two points to substantiate my viewpoint, which I will elaborate in following paragraphs.
First, burrowing money from a friend can destroy the trust that has been built up. Friendship is built on the trust of a stranger and this is completely different from family relations. These relationships are quite fragile, regardless of the fact that whether they have been built up for several years or just beginning. The trust can be destroyed in a single instance of broken promise to repay the loan. For instance, in high school, I lent some amount of money to someone as he told me that his mother was sick and he needs money for her treatment. I later found that he used that money to pay his due bills at five star restaurant where he offered a date to his girlfriend. I was very angry to find out that he manipulated me, after this incident I never spoke to that person again.
Second, money and friendship just don’t mix so it would be wise not to lend or borrow money either to or from friends because this will cause conflicts. The borrower who is behind on his payments doesn’t feel the transaction is hurting the friendship but this is not what the lender feel. Lender is more anxious than borrower in this case, as he anticipates to receive money but when he doesn’t receive it, he begins to doubt the borrower that he will never return the money. A few days ago, I borrowed hundred dollars from one of my friends because I was not having cash at that time. After some time it skipped out of my mind that I have to return money to my friend. Later, when he asked for his money I returned him immediately. Now whenever I meet him at class, he seems to avoid me. As a result we are no longer friends now. So, I lost one of my friends owing to misunderstanding. I think we all have tendency to look into things in a way that makes us feel better about ourselves and this is exactly what is causing trouble.
In conclusion, people may occasionally need to borrow money to cover unexpected expenses, I believe borrowing money from a friend is wrong decision. This can ruin true friendship due to the trust that he being broken on not repaying the loan and people feel uncomfortable lending money. So to avoid relationship getting broken due to possible conflicts that may occur between two friends, it is not advisable to lend or borrow money from a friend.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 625, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'restaurant' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'restaurants'.
Suggestion: restaurants
...money to pay his due bills at five star restaurant where he offered a date to his girlfrie...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...n the money. A few days ago, I borrowed hundred dollars from one of my friends because ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...use I was not having cash at that time. After some time it skipped out of my mind tha...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... So to avoid relationship getting broken due to possible conflicts that may occur...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2293.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61368209256 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67077435183 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51106639839 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0454543569 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5416666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7083333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04166666667 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316831416251 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909594922255 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521151606212 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195933489534 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235518894017 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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