in order to be successful, a person must be open to new ideas and willing to change his or her mind.
Human beings have always been eager to be successful during the lifetime. It gives them a pleasure sense and strong motivation will be made for further activities. Some people believe that everyone who wishes to be successful in his or her activities should have a rigid mind without attention to the other's opinions. Having an opposite viewpoint, I firmly believe that people should notice novel ideas to reach their goals efficiently. In what follows, I will scrutinize the most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, various opinions help people to explore useful methods for their tasks. Needless to say that each person has exclusive experiences. Hence, when they present their ideas about an issue, they pave the way for extracting creative solutions. Consequently, it will have a profound effect on being successful. For instance, based on my own personal experience, when I was a mechanical engineering student I had always different challenges with design projects. As you know, everyone who deals with design projects needs to have a comprehensive understanding of all the aspects of the final target. I tried to participate in a weekly meeting in the electrical engineering department. However, apparently their major has substantial differents with mechanical engineering projects, I learned a lot how to put their new ideas into my personal tasks. As a result, I could present the best plan for the car competitions in the university. It is obvious that getting new ideas play a prominent role towards the success.
A further more significant point is that new ideas often prevent making mistakes during the activities. People may confront critical challenges during their activities. Sometimes, making unreliable decisions leads them to waste time and energy. If people be aware of the other ideas, making mistakes will be at the minimum level. In fact, nobody can ignore the importance of making proper decisions without mistakes on being successful. Let's consider my little brother's experience as an example. He had been working as a painter for three years before he changed his job position. At that time, students had to prepare the final paintings without any incorrect features. He used to ignore the other's opinions with a rigid mind. Therefore, he was not allowed to continue his profession because of low-quality artworks. Had he noticed to the new ideas during his work, he would be able to have a permanent job as a paper. That is why the new ideas are important for having a proper performance and being successful.
In brief, by taking into account all the aforementioned reasons, it seems that having an open mind to new ideas is a rational standpoint to be successful in the near future. Not only does it help them to be familiar with creative solutions based on valuable experiences, but also it prevents making mistakes. Therefore, this strategy is highly recommended for all people to reach their final targets effectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...s without mistakes on being successful. Lets consider my little brothers experience ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in brief, in fact, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2490.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17671517672 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89831829887 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 778.5 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4829936456 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0333333333 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322900179835 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784403491966 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788352333075 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195189567866 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469347820154 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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