“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
Most people agree that modern technology affects society and human’s life. Therefore, the question is coming is that Are these effects beneficial or not? I’m of the opinion that internet has beneficial effects in our modern life which I explained it by two reason in the following passage.
To begin with, recently internet changes the educational methods which make them simple for both students and teachers. Decades ago when internet and technology depending on it, were not well-known and widespread between societies, education was just dangling on schools and universities. You couldn’t get any educational degree or certificate without attending any schools or institutes. However, nowadays people just pick up online courses and learn anything they desire. Also they can refund if the course isn’t useful for them or don’t like the tutor’s learning techniques. As my personal experience when I was teenager, I want to learn computer programming thus I enrolled in a class which the institute was away from home then I spent half of my day commuting between the institute and my home, although, I wasn’t really satisfied by my tutor teaching techniques. But when I stepped in university as computer engineering student, I followed some online courses for lessons which I liked them or I was weak at them and internet really eased the path of education for me.
For second and final reason as profits of internet, it also makes communication even simpler. When there was no internet in late years, people for communicating have very limited choices like telephoning to each other and posting mails. Telephoning was extremely expensive when you wanted to contact a person who lived in a foreign country. similarly mailing was in fact had its own expenses and was really time consuming. After emerging internet in our lives, it introduces helpful approaches for communication. For instance, Yahoo messenger was one of the first ways which has been performed via internet or E-mail, you could send a mail to anyone in anywhere just in a glimpse of an eye. After a while, applications such as Skype or Telegram introduced which make contacting in reality smoother. Moreover, you could have video call with good quality through Skype or chatting with multiple people at the same time by Telegram.
These reasons indicate that Internet have affected our lives in positive way and make communication and education simple for us.
- “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion. 86
- “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion. 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...courses and learn anything they desire. Also they can refund if the course isn'...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Similarly
... person who lived in a foreign country. similarly mailing was in fact had its own expense...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: similarly,
... person who lived in a foreign country. similarly mailing was in fact had its own expense...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25252525253 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89207460147 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3695054106 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.473684211 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194014501652 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643624708637 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856765120145 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136379343507 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936663211692 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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