“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
Most people agree that modern technology affect society and human’s life. I’m of the opinion that internet has beneficial effects in our modern life which I explained it by two reason in the following passage.
To begin with, recently internet changes the education methods which make it simple for both students and teachers. Decades ago which internet and technologies which depend on it, were not well known and widespread between societies, education was just dependent on schools and universities. You couldn’t get any educational degree or certificate without attending to schools or institutes. However, now days people just pick up online courses and learn anything they desire. Also they refund if the course isn’t useful for them or don’t like the tutor’s learning method. As my personal experience when I was teenager, I attend to learn computer programming so I enrolled in a class which the institute was very far from our home then I waste half of my day commuting to institute, although, I wasn’t really satisfied with my tutor teaching method. But when I step in university as computer engineering student, I follow some online courses for lessons which I liked them or I weak at them and internet was really ease the path of education.
For second and final reason, internet also make communication even simpler. When there was no internet in decades ago, people for communicating have very limited choices like telephoning to each other and posting mails. Telephoning was extremely expensive when you want to contact a person who lived in foreign country. Also posting mails was even had its own expenses and really time consuming. After Internet emerged in our lives, it introduces beneficial methods for communicating. For instance, Yahoo messenger was one of the first methods which done via internet or G-mail, you can send a mail to anyone in anywhere just in a glimpse of an eye. After a while, applications like Skype and WhatsApp came which make contacting even easier. Moreover, you could have video call with good quality via Skype or chatting with multiple people at the same time via WhatsApp.
These reasons indicate that Internet have affected our lives and make them easier in both communication and education. Internet have many other beneficial effects in our daily lives which it’s out of scope of this essay.
- “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion. 83
- “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion. 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...courses and learn anything they desire. Also they refund if the course isn't us...
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Line 3, column 1040, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'eased'.
Suggestion: eased
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... a person who lived in foreign country. Also posting mails was even had its own expe...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Message: The proper name in singular (Internet) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, well, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19896640827 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80613254825 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583979328165 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5785562617 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.894736842 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196556926353 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699569340918 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886807783845 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156681757347 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972515215893 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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