Parents give their children weekly money to buy whatever they want. Some people think this can cause bad habits and idea about money in children. Others think the opposite. What’s your opinion?
Being a controversial issue, whether it is appropriate for parents to give children weekly money has aroused a great deal of attention during the past few decades in the society. Some hold the view that this will teach the children to over spend their money in the future, while others assert it to be important for their development. As for me, I side with the idea that it’s reasonable and beneficial for parents to give weekly money to their kids. Essential and persuasive evidence will be provided in the following paragraphs to verify my judgement.
Of all the reasons leading to my point, the most rudimentary one is that this method can encourage kids to be responsible for their decisions. For example, if the kid runs out of the money too fast, his parents can punish him by refusing to give him any money next month. Meanwhile, if the kid misuses the money to buy something bad, take pornography, the parents can teach the kid to spend the money only on what is needed and beneficial. These two examples represent how weekly money can help parents to educate their children, guide them to form the habit of being responsible for their own decision.
Besides, the fact that money can tell them basic knowledge about finance can also be applied to further explain why I think it is necessary for parents to give money to their sons or daughters. According to a recent survey conducted by BBC, a mainstream medium all over the world, those who have once received money when they were young perform better in mathematics and finance afterwards. As far as I am concerned, it is mainly because they have learnt to manage their money wisely and reasonably at a very young age, which naturally promises their intuitive understanding of economics and finance. Therefore, it is never a bad thing to provide them with small amount of money and train their numeral and financial capabilities.
Often neglected but no less important, the money also act a way of encouragement. A good case in point is that when a father wants his son to wash the car for him, he may encourage the kid by promising to offer him one dollar more than usual next week. Another good case in point is that when the daughter dislikes going to kindergarten, her mother can provide her with an extra 10-dollar-bill. These are very practical and effective way for parent to help children overcome the difficulties and develop necessary living skills.
Simply put, it is fairly safe to draw a conclusion that it is beneficial for parents to give weekly money to their kids, because it can equip their children with practical skills, as well as act as a effective way of encouragement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79004329004 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7077610637 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9957200285 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.176470588 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1764705882 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363223163307 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118510687565 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742870844859 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203428638416 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664439786634 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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