Parents should learn from children
Nowadays the study of students is a concern of every parent and with the change of tomes, advanced technology has begun to spread to every household. As time goes on, the improvement of society highlights the differencies of the viewpoints between children and their parents. Some people think children should learn form parents, while others think the opposite. Personally, I prefer the latter one.
First of all ,it is easier for children to learn new technologies and better adapt to the modern society. Because in my opinion I believe that children are much more receptive to new things than their parents . Basically, the adult brain is less able to learn new things and more set in its ways; you cannot teach an old dog new tricks. However, kids' brains are open to learning new concepts. They can think outside the box, because “the box” has not even been built yet. For example online shopping is popular recently so many young will buy something when they need. But older people always think it is so trouble and uncomfortable . Online shopping not only can you not get out of your house, but also you will have to do it as long as you want it, don’t worry about it or you don’t sell it. And wechat is a new app it is helpful for us study and work ,a lot of job begin to use it to solve about the problem of communication inconvenience, can also send various documents. It is convenient to use. But older people is not familiar with them and they are very difficult to use ,but young people are different, they can use them very flexibly. Thereby parents should learn those from children.
Second of all children have a better talent for learning language system and new ideas. Because I think the children don’t have complex psychology but adults have a lot of things to influence them study and study. Such as when the kids are born they don’t know anything. At that time , their only task was to learn the lauguage and modern knowledge, which allow them to have the talent of learning modern knowledge from an early age ,but their parents could not.
At least in fact , children have a lot of learn from their parents . Like parents have more life experience than their children therefore they can help them avoid mistakes, and how to deal with interpersonal relationship like the relationship between classmates and friends, how to manage money and how to spend money ,all of this need parents’ guidance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, as to, at least, for example, i think, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79294117647 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55410781659 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522352941176 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6919260291 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5909090909 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3181818182 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328116978307 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112128871596 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170887320617 0.0737576698707 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218675226195 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218102369278 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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