Parents today are more involved in their children education there before
Now a day’s education for their kids became a nightmare for the parents. They spend lot of thier hours for the research and spend lot of money for giving extra tuition. I also agree that parents are highly interested in their children's education compared to previous days and I believe this because of various reasons.
First reason is, giving education to their kids became a prestige issue for some of the parents. For example, in my community some parents want their kids to be educated in abroad. So these parents are researching with all resources available and more over they will give pressure the kids to make thier dreams come true. By giving a better education they think that they will get good recognition from the community. Early days parents are not that much care about their kids’ education in the sense that they are happy to admit any thing they become. Therefore parents are doing more hard work to keep their kids education to build up their status level.
Second reason is, parents are fulfilling their own dreams with their kids. For instance, my sister had a dream to become a doctor, because of the financial constrains she did not made her dream. Now she want her daughter to become a doctor. She was so concerned about her and she is working hard to achieve it. In order to satisfy themselves new gen parents want their kids educate more. This type of things are not there on early days, they are happy in themselves and also on their children.
Finally, most of the parents are in a fantasy world, the way of thinking has changed a lot. They think that money is more important and they want their kids to earn more. In order to achieve that they force the kids to study uninterested subjects. Most of the parents research about which course the kids can earn more. This does not mean that they did not care about them but I believe they are giving something extra care which is not good for the kids.
In conclusion, now a days it is more familiar that parents are more involved in kids education. Sometimes this is good but in some cases this will result in more mental stress and depression
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63947368421 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28806823165 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452631578947 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0627025231 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.1363636364 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30809281858 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109987796396 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924571607716 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187257401896 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454163240441 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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