In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
This is one of the controversial issues among people that the result of that can determine young people's destiny. I completely agree that nowadays young people can make a decision better in comparison with the past.
First, today young people are educated and now more than the past young people. Nowadays, people face with the huge advancement and improvement of new technologies such as smart phone, computer, and the others. These new inventions prepare an appropriate situation for young people to learn a vital and useful information. This information helps the young people to make a decision careful and make correct decisions. However, in the past, young people just learn from their parents since they depend on their parents to make a decision.
Second, young people now have a different view about life. In the past, people used to live with each other and confer about small details. In contrast, now, young people want to be independent and live alone. Living lonely is a great opportunity for young people face life's difficulties. So, they can experience about varIous issueS which assists them to distinguish between correct and wrong. And we see how nowadays youth people are successful and prosperous in their education and job.
On the other hand, some people believe that the young people are not able to make a decision alone both in the past and now. They think parents must always give some suggestions and guidances to the young people to remove difficulties from their lives. They declare that parents can help them to save their time and money with their consideration. For example, when the young people want to choose a new job, parents should help them to know everything about that job to avoid them from wasting their time and money. However, I still assert that young people have this ability to make a decision better. Maybe, there are some advantages for young people that their parents help them to decide about their lives, but I also think it is completely false. In fact, nowadays young people before deciding about their lives consider all aspect of their decision.
In conclusion, today young people live individually, and they are prosperous in their lives. Now young people have beneficial experiences and information that support them to make a correct and the best decision independently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04134366925 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55275449181 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470284237726 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0761757577 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6818181818 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5909090909 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.624287363348 0.236089414692 264% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220911801586 0.076458572812 289% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995463623939 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.404834188601 0.150856017488 268% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103043924851 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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