People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend university or college? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
People attend university or college for various reasons. Some of the major reasons include but are not restricted to gaining knowledge in one's area of interest, instilling social skills, expanding their horizons by exploring new concepts and for the overall development of their personality.
In my opinion, the supreme reason that an individual attends college or university is to enhance his/her skills in a particular domain. For example, a person who is interested in programming will attend a course providing classes related to Computer Science. This will help the person to gain the required programming knowledge.
Along with that, he/she gets to learn the latest trends or concepts in that domain and perform research in the same. Being in an environment with fellow students interested in the same domain keeps the curiosity alive.
As the aforementioned point suggests, being and working with fellow students also helps in imbibing the spirit of teamwork in individuals. People understand the importance of collaborating in a team and bringing out efficient solutions. It also teaches other soft skills like interacting with a crowd and handling various events.
Lastly, going to college or university helps in the development of an individual's overall personality. It develops numerous values and provides various new experiences which aid in this development.
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... same domain keeps the curiosity alive. As the aforementioned point suggests, be...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
... university helps in the development of an individuals overall personality. It develops numero...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, lastly, so, still, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 212.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52358490566 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99261506496 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1189407982 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5833333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210226755747 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814559561965 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111362388012 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110435101981 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950543231055 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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