Student life is the best but the most important time in one's life. And to achieve this beautiful experience in life one need to attend college or university. This is the place where people can experiment various things besides increasing knowledge, prepare himself or herself for the future life and explore life in his utmost level.
First of all, knowledge is the main aspect to join college. One can gather knowledge from the trained instructors, clear their doubts, know new things and so on. It is the place where people can increase their little knowing and broaden their mind. Students can also explore their others talents and interests here. For instance, one of my friend was going major in physics. She also had interest in computer programming. Therefore, she took an extra course in computer programming and fulfilled her wish. People get this kind of chance in college only.
Secondly, it is always known that, a graduate or post-graduate student is given more value then any non-graduate student. A student gets certified degree from a college which is very much needed to get a job. Students also get the chance to meet many companies, give interview and get job in the career fair of college or universities. This is a great opportunity for the students to get a job before finishing their graduation which reduces the hassle of job hunting. College makes the students prepare for their upcoming battle, so that they can tackle themselves in any situation.
College is the place where students of different culture, region and religion come from. This is a great opportunity for the students to meet new people, make good friends. By meeting new people, students come to know about their culture and tradition. Students also can nourish their hobbies by joining college clubs and organizing events. For example, if someone likes to dance, he or she can perform in club events and present his/her talent. Students learn team work and communication skills through club events as well
College or university is one lifetime opportunity to explore new things and make memories for the rest of the life. One person surely does not want to miss his/her chance to make their own life memorable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...the best but the most important time in ones life. And to achieve this beautiful exp...
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Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e himself or herself for the future life and explore life in his utmost level. ...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...st-graduate student is given more value then any non-graduate student. A student get...
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Line 7, column 462, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to team'
Suggestion: to team
... present his/her talent. Students learn team work and communication skills through c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9972972973 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56695440758 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537837837838 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4745036154 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3913043478 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0869565217 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163482664885 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517439403359 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040661923734 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095799251671 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00880672498431 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.