People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Tourism is gaining ground in the modern world. People are traveling from one country to another and within their own country. Some people believe traveling in their own country is more advantageous than traveling to other countries. I believe both have their pros and cons.
Travel has been associate with experiencing different places and learning new things. Every country has some mind-boggling place to see in the world. Most of the people like to travel within the border of their own country. People who could not afford financially and could have limited time off from work like to travel only nearby states and cities. For example, during my high school as I had more burden from my studies, I used to travel within my State. So that I would not have to waste my more time traveling. Even these trips within my states a has introduced me to a lot of the new experiences. I had to spend less time and money but, I got equal enjoyment to travel to far places. Therefore traveling in my own country also provides the opportunity to learn about new people because even to these places people come from different states and cities. It is always worth knowing about your own country before exploring the places to other countries.
A tremendous boom in science and technology has endowed humans with far more facilities than in the past. For example, development in the aircraft and airplanes had turned the world into a global village. Now traveling from one corner of the world to another has become efficient and quick. Reaping the benefits of such development in technology people like to travel to different countries. Trips to the country in which a person has never been before giving a great experience. Every country has a different culture, and while traveling to these countries allows a person to meet different people and understand each other culture. After my graduation, I went to London and this one of the most amusing trips of my life. In London, I got to see the different architects of the building, which I have never seen in my country. Moreover, England has a unique history, while on this trip I got to learn their history, and I got the chance to meet and confabulate with people from all over the world. Hence traveling to foreign countries is always benefits people to learn more.
To conclude, every country has a different culture and famous places s to visit. Traveling within their own country and other countries both add new experiences in people's lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...qual enjoyment to travel to far places. Therefore traveling in my own country also provid...
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56737866454 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43023255814 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3144955753 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3846153846 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432029812503 0.236089414692 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132586242156 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121896127002 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321201870011 0.150856017488 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605207543122 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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