People nowadays are more willing to help other people (giving food or clothes) than in the past.
In the past people lived in small bound and they depended on each other relating to taking on difficulties and satisfying needs. In spite of, nowadays, people have become in depended on each other as a developing of the world and expanding society, contrary to established beliefs that people helped other people in the past more than nowadays, I am of the opinion that human has increased their activity related to helping other people. Enhancing communication, changing lifestyle and becoming popular are main reasons why I hold this point of view.
The first point worth mentioning would be that people became aware of other people’s requirements in entire of the world easily than in the past. Therefore, it gives chance to somebody to help poor people. A prime example from my own experience may shed some light on this point. Three years ago, we are informed of happening earthquake in one city of Japan. My family sent some clothes and food to helped suffering people in the Japan.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. Word is going modernization. Hence, people’s lifestyle is changing and people tend to coordinate their selves with fashion. Consequently, people especially youth change their outdated clothes with new and modern. In other words, they give the clothes and other stuff, which they do not need them to people who need them. For instance, my friend is rich and always do shopping and buy any things, which are advertised on the TV or city billboards. In the other hand, she gives her old clothes to their house worker’s daughter.
Another point, which merits attention, would be that nowadays helping other people is one way to became famous. It means somebody uses this method to show off. Whereas, doing so makes opportunity for people who required help. For example, Madonna donates all of her clothes to poor people at the end of the year; I think she does this to show she is a kind and merciful. Whether, this is not the right way for showing yourself as a good person but helps the people to reach their needs.
All in all, if all the factors contemplated we can reach this conclusion that willing to help humankind increased compare with the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to suffer' or 'suffer'.
Suggestion: to suffer; suffer
...ly sent some clothes and food to helped suffering people in the Japan. There is also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60062060155 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550264550265 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0968550175 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8571428571 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49106581589 0.236089414692 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123113206172 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103614308574 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245230974868 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836225039258 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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