People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life.
Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Use specific reasons to support
your answer.
Undoubtedly, everybody has a unique atitude toward their lives, and based on that they plan their daily schadules. Having a correct and practical personality which matchs the reality of personal lifestyle is vital to help people succeed. While some people are happy with a romantic perspective toward life and think that it is a better way for living, others disagree. In my opinion, we need a real attitude toward the real condition in whcih we live. IN the following essat, I will elaborate on my reasons.
To begin with, life is a reality with diverse aspects of factors through which affects our life. We see myriad diverse conditions from a cool to a harsh living environment, full of beauty and unbeauty. Having a realistic aspect of view, provides us a workeable way of thinking about our life. Through which this view, it is easier plan a practical schedule to deal with all good and bad situations. We will prepare ourselves emotionally and logically for every condition. This strategy help us to bear in any condition. For instance, when I look at my father lifestyle, through which he has made attempts to accept the reality of life, has led to have a stable and calm lifestyle in different situations. He has seen several booming and crashing period of economy and he passed all of them with the least casualties, just because of his realistic points of view, he has confessed.
Moreover, having a romantic thinking cap easily end up overwhelming in harsh conditions. Most of the romantic people live on clouds, which they cann't see the real world consitions frankly. Hence, they face problelms, if the ideal atmosphere sround them changes a little bit. This uncertainty in their life won't gauruntee their success. To put it into perspective, I recall a friend of mine in college, who had a romantic lifestyle and he was very optimistic about world. He was very happy with his point of view. He enjoyed talking with girls all the day and night about litrature and love story along the semester. Finally, since he had failed to planned a real student lifestyle in his college time, he planned to fail not only in professional school life but also in his personal life. He overwhelmed when his girls friends quitted him one after one because he was not successful in his school.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that havindg a realistic ppoint of view is useful and necessary to live in this fluctuating world. This is because realistic lifestyle help us to understand the reality and prepare ourselves in advance for different condition and because avoid overwhelming becasue of having a romantic attitude which ban us to plan a practical schedule for our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, frankly, hence, if, look, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87280701754 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71408668682 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506578947368 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1812219886 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5833333333 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130999944505 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401444220049 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392148349377 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886304151559 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00822189084154 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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