People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that very different from what they do at work.
The type of hobbies or physical activities people should experience has become the topic of great controversy in recent years. There is a considerable body of opinion holds that people should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that very different from what they do at work. This paper will elucidate the reasons why I am in favor of this opinion.
On one hand, career success and health improvement is what I consider a crucial factor. It is noteworthy that investing time to relax with hobbies or physical activities they had never experienced is synonymous with broadening their horizons and deepening their knowledge. Thanks to this, people are likely to have a solid foundation of knowledge. Accordingly, they are capable of finding and understanding their problems precisely. With this in mind, they stand a golden chance to ameliorate the qualities and abilities to make independent judgment and to solve problems better. Eventually, this probably gives rise to career accomplishment. More notably, while people are experiencing new activities, having an enjoyable and high-quality experience is inevitable. In the event of this, there is a likelihood for them to inspire and motivate themselves to make strenuous efforts. On the ground of that, it is possible for them to get satisfaction out of realizing themselves develop and reach some of their goals and abilities. During this process, they are prone to relieve tension and promote circulation to make the brain more active. Under those circumstances, it makes it feasible for them to ameliorate their physical and intellectual ability. Given these points, undertaking new hobbies or sports greatly contributes to health improvement.
On the other hand, some people might express a different view that experiencing new activities discourages them from observing frugality in the expenditure of time. As a consequence, it creates a huge burden on their career progression. Although that might be true, it is just applicable to a minority. People have already well thought about the felicitous way to perfect themselves in many aspects. Incidentally, there is a certain purposefulness about doing new activities. Therefore, it is unlikely that investing time this kind of hobbies prevents them from achieve satisfactory results in their career.
Another points often overlooked is even if the waste of time does exist, it should be considered as the chance for people to be exposed to various situations. By the same token, they have an incentive to reflect on themselves and thought about their future direction. By virtue of this, they are given the opportunity to identify their strength and weaknesses, which creates a significant impact on the current career situation. Beyond a shadow of a doubt, they tend to enhance their potential in all other aspects of life. Thus, indeed, empowers them to achieve satisfactory outcome from their work. By and large, people should put off the idea that investing time for new experience prevents them from being successful.
In summary, career accomplishment and health improvement are the convincing reasons for my approval. It is my hope that people take this writing into great consideration to gather diverse perspectives on the issue regarding the type of hobbies or physical activities people should experience during their freetime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, incidentally, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in summary, kind of, by and large, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2837.0 1977.66487455 143% => OK
No of words: 531.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34274952919 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.023754993 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499058380414 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 894.6 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.420292894 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8275862069 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3103448276 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44827586207 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8709677419 211% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373823733691 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896971333939 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154519696169 0.0737576698707 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243750139984 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170353751481 0.0645574589148 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 86.8835125448 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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