A person should never make an important decision alone
Some people prefer to make all their critical decisions by their own, while others never make a decision without consulting with others. In my perspective, we should never make hard decisions alone. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, we cannot evaluate all aspects of a situation alone, because our information is never adequate enough. By consulting someone who has faced similar situation, we can carefully weigh up different options. For example, when I graduated from high school ten years ago, I had to choose between enrolling in either a public university or a private one. I sought advice from one of my teachers who has attended both kinds of universities. He informed me that public schools in Iran provides students with more productive classes, therefore I chose a public university. If I hadn’t discussed this with my teacher, I may have made a wrong decision.
Secondly, I feel that when we make decisions alone, we are more likely to make hasty and arbitrary decisions. On the contrary, when we discuss our problems with others, we take our time to think all the details through. For instance, last year I was about to make an impulsive purchase; I decided to buy a luxury automobile. It seemed a good idea to me at the time, but after a consult with my friend, I realized that the prices are likely to drop in next two months; therefor it is better to postpone car purchasing.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is better not to make difficult decisions alone. By consulting others, it is more probable to make a rational and deliberate decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... good idea to me at the time, but after a consult with my friend, I realized that the pri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 281.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81850533808 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78315478056 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615658362989 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8368060933 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2666666667 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188471039534 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069249799934 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940347497071 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137187937962 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950278692888 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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