Do you agree or disagree with the
following statement?
Childhood is the happiest time
of a person's life.
Use specific reasons and
examples to support your opinion
The life of the human is mainly divided into the three parts; child, adult, old. Many people think that, the childhood is the best part of the human life. I agree with this statement. I have two reasons for that, which I will explain in following essay.
First of all, In child stage there is no any responsibility on our shoulder. The child is moving here and there freely without any hesitation. In this period of life people is noy caring about others opinion. There is no responsibility of making money by doing work. To proved this statement my own experience is enough. In my childhood I am very free to do anything. Everyone coming to me to playing with me, kidling with me. There is no any kind of stress in my mind. Also, no fear of anyone. As a result, of these things the memory of my early stage of life is still in my mind , which will give me plesure.
Secondly, in early stage of life everyone is fullfill your wishes, whatever you want. This will give emense enjoyment to the child. This enjoyment leds to the happiness.For example, when i was six year old. I demand a new tricycle to my father, Because my birthday is just about to come. I want this tricycle as my birthday present. But the main problmem is that the price of this tricycle is 10,000 rupees, which was much more higher than nomal price. Just to see my happy face my dad purchase this gifts and cherry on the cake that he surprised me by giving another present, which is video game. So, by that way my family has made my day.
In conclusion, I believes that childhood days are the golden days of the life in the journey of any people from bith to death. Because in this stage there is no any responsibility and because you get everything, whatever you want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41795665635 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42081381072 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53560371517 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9205691607 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.4583333333 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4583333333 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70833333333 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131991169571 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433043616489 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537786085328 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967593069685 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528426520491 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 11.7677419355 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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