Pets should be treated like family. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
We all are the living creatures be it human or animal. Similarly, we need love, care and affection too. In the given scenario, it is said whether we should accept the pet as our family memeber or not. Meanwhile I am of the opinion that no matter it is animal or human once they become the part of our family, we should treat them in the same way. I feel this way for several reason which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, pets are those which we adopt to our family for whatever reason. When they start living with us they become our companion. To be more precise, we start treating them like our family member too. Drawing from my own experience, I have a dog in my home. He is such a sweetheart. Everyone treats him like a small baby and surprisingly he also understand our language. Although he is a pet, he listens to us and follows our instruction like if I asked him to get out of my room then he goes out and wait until my permission to come in. This amazes me that how can a animal be such honest in the world where the near ones does not even care to listen us. Therefore, we should not ignore our pet and should them treat them as our dear ones,
Next, the word is full of fake people and it is very arduous to find the trustworthy people. Having said that, we have our pet who always guard us and never think any bad of us. I have witnessed this in my own personal life, my pet is always stays behind me so that no one could touch or harm me. If somebody accidentally bit me, he immediately take an action of it by barking him/her. Hence, how can this be taken for granted and how can I not get attached to him with level of loyalty. Needless to say, this is something which is very rare in this real world and almost impossible to find this quality in people around us.
All things considered, eventhough pets are animal we have no authority to behave them as animal. Since they are simply like our family who never left us in hard times and always be there as our back we should always be grateful for them and accept them as our member.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd affection too. In the given scenario, it is said whether we should accept the ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...t the pet as our family memeber or not. Meanwhile I am of the opinion that no matter it i...
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Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...em in the same way. I feel this way for several reason which I will explore in the subsequent ...
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Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
... To start with, pets are those which we adopt to our family for whatever reason. When th...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...dopt to our family for whatever reason. When they start living with us they become o...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'understands'.
Suggestion: understands
...e a small baby and surprisingly he also understand our language. Although he is a pet, he ...
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Suggestion:
...m to get out of my room then he goes out and wait until my permission to come in....
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...to come in. This amazes me that how can a animal be such honest in the world whe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... me that how can a animal be such honest in the world where the near ones does no...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...ody accidentally bit me, he immediately take an action of it by barking him/her. Hen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, i feel, to start with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 43.0788530466 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19451371571 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27080601806 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508728179551 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3463881074 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0952380952 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0952380952 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131171101699 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449999429839 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461626958431 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918586228432 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037673182326 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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