-Technological progress has made the world a better place. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny the fact that technological advances has made our life a lot more convenient than ever before. In the given scenario it is perceived that the globe has become a better place to reside along with the advancement in technology. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly technological development has aid living now far better than it used to be in past. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, technology is a boon to the people of this modern world. To be more precise, nowadays through internet we can communicate with people irrespective of any place. Similarly, we can interact with our closed ones or working professionals all over the world despite of long distance. To exemplify, a person in Nepal can have interaction with the person in USA with audio and video callings. This way they can flourish their business sharing their ideas and concept without having to meet in person. Indeed, the technological advances has contributing ease in th people’s life.
Secondly, introduction of technology has made possible to live a luxurious life. Technology innovation such as vehicle, washing machine, induction gas, and many more plays a crucial role in making our life lavish. Drawing from my own experience, i used to do laundry by myself before the invention of washing machine however today this is all done by machine with one button. Likewise, when it comes to vehicle, we used to walk long distance to reach our destination but nowadays we all have our private vehicle to travel. Needeless to say, technology has made made our life luxurious to high extent.
The above stated statements sounds reasonable however the downsides that the innovation has generated should not be ignored. Owing to the advances,people have become much more lazy that they could not even prefer to do their own work. For instance, if a person is starving he better choose to order food from online instead of preparing meal for themself. Unquestionably, this activity has made people suffer from various disease such as obesity, diabetes and so on. Therefore, one should be mindful of the consequences that could arise by their own neglegence.
All things considered, thanks to the technology that it has ameliorated our quality of living. Despite the fact, repercussion associated with it should not be taken for granted.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
No one can deny the fact that technologi...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...iving now far better than it used to be in past. I feel this way for several reasons wh...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lavish. Drawing from my own experience, i used to do laundry by myself before t...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...avish. Drawing from my own experience, i used to do laundry by myself before th...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Drawing from my own experience, i used to do laundry by myself before the inven...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: made
...ravel. Needeless to say, technology has made made our life luxurious to high extent. The...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...ld not be ignored. Owing to the advances,people have become much more lazy that they co...
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Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er food from online instead of preparing meal for themself. Unquestionably, this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05025125628 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89077094433 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2544761531 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3636363636 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170627401283 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524061196042 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03708568411 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929807334437 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328898235121 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
No one can deny the fact that technologi...
^^
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...iving now far better than it used to be in past. I feel this way for several reasons wh...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lavish. Drawing from my own experience, i used to do laundry by myself before t...
^^
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...avish. Drawing from my own experience, i used to do laundry by myself before th...
^
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Drawing from my own experience, i used to do laundry by myself before the inven...
^^
Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: made
...ravel. Needeless to say, technology has made made our life luxurious to high extent. The...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...ld not be ignored. Owing to the advances,people have become much more lazy that they co...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er food from online instead of preparing meal for themself. Unquestionably, this ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05025125628 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89077094433 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2544761531 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3636363636 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170627401283 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524061196042 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03708568411 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929807334437 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328898235121 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.