Place would you like to visit?
Use details and reasons to support your response.
In my view, almost everyone likes traveling and I am not an exception. I have visited a lot of places of interest. But if someone asked me what famous place I would like to visit, I would answer Australia.
This country has a large number of unique species of different animals, which you cannot find anywhere on our planet, for example penguins, koalas, and a lot of parrots. I am interested to see these animals in their natural environment. At the same time I am care about the ecological situation, and I think that it would be great if all people think more about the environment. As for me, I want to visit this country not only as a traveler, but as a participant of the special organization. The project of this organization is directed to students and the young all around the world. And the main goal is to support the population of rare species of birds in this area. Thus, I will have an opportunity not only to see the place, which I would like to visit, but also the chance to help.
Another reason why I want to see this country is that the English language is the official language of this country. I think that it would be a great practice for my English. During my participation in this program I will be able to improve my speaking skills, because I will have to speak English all the time.
Thus, despite the fact that I have visited a lot of countries, I am interested in visiting Australia. First is that my English will be better, because I have some speaking problems. The second thing, it is just a great place to be in, because there is unique nature and exotic animals, but what is more important is the fact that I would like not only to enjoy this beauty, but I would also like helping animals, taking part in the special project for students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill have to speak English all the time. Thus, despite the fact that I have visit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the special project for students.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'as for', 'for example', 'i think', 'in my view', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.199453551913 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.144808743169 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0737704918033 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0437158469945 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0874316939891 0.0685040099705 128% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120218579235 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.016393442623 0.0351676179071 47% => More participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.57122658031 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355191256831 0.0309702414327 115% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.112021857923 0.0887237588012 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0327868852459 0.0209618222197 156% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0136612021858 0.0139019557991 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1800.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 328.0 408.028673835 80% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48780487805 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.289634146341 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22256097561 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.125 0.174417080927 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0731707317073 0.112833075102 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57122658031 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460365853659 0.524397521467 88% => OK
Word variations: 46.0968396817 59.2087087015 78% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1663895462 48.84282405 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 42.756097561 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.21782178218 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22096329751 0.300154397459 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102220200251 0.103427244359 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.080980750627 0.0752933317313 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.500313508702 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138794103099 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916764311254 0.114077575197 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881416224014 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355186800101 0.336927656856 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0765063171509 0.067059652881 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16174611468 0.210909579961 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486638113674 0.0618886996521 79% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 21 Out of 30