Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays Children tend to play a lot of computer games and mobile games which are not really good for their health neither in their studies. In my opinion playing games is a waste of time, I completely agree with it, It is my firm belief that children nowadays should not be allowed to play, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, playing games on computer also called as blue screen is harmful for children's eyes. The constant watch to the screen harms the eyes slowly, children get glasses because of continues watching the screen. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience.So I used to play game on my computer continuously for many hours which would lead to soar eyes, headaches or sleep deprivation. And in few months I went to check my eyes and the doctors said to I had got negative number glasses and to reduces screen time. Moreover, you became physical less active which is not good for children in growth age. They should be more involved in physical activities which help them in good health rather than computer games. For this reason, children should not be given games to play for hours and hours.
Secondly, I think it doesn't really help you in anyways. Children in growth age should more be focused on academics rather than such games, and they should be doing more their knowledge stuff which will help them in future. Drawing from an own seen experience, for instance a cousin of my always used to play games of computer, later on he got addicted to it. And while his primary school exams he couldn't help himself but only play game. It was very difficult for his parents to make him sit for his studies. It was tremendously difficult for his parents to completely get him out of the gaming zone. Eventually, started studying properly which helped him for his future. It’s certainly clear to see why children should not be allowed to play computer game on continuous bases.
Finally, I would like to share my last reason why chidren should not play games is that, video games by their own nature isolate kids from the outside world. These games can also be played alone or 'first person' so there is the possibility that there can be NO interaction at all with other humans; and that right there shows that if you child is playing an inordinate amount of hours by themselves gaming, then this tendency could lead further and further into social isolationism. For instance, there was a kid in my neigbourhood who always used to play computer games. His mother used to insist him to go out for cycling or to play in garden to that he'll met some new friends, but he never listened to his mother. Later on, he had difficulty communicating with his friends and also new classmates didn't talked to him as they thought he was weird. As a result, it created problems for him.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that children of growth must be more focused of their studies and curriculum because games harms children eye and it doesn't help them for future or academics purpose.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2565.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 551.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65517241379 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43717777517 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49001814882 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 773.1 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.106681919 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9583333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393341047231 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119492989824 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104813910501 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248165638435 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894732042318 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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