professioanal athletes, such as football or basketball players, should not be paid the high slaries thet they receive from their teams.
Sport is one of the great issues in today's world. Almost all countries pursue golden medal in universal competitions. For Some people it is acceptable to pay high amounts of money to professional athletes, albeit others believe that, it is not true to pay as much as it is regular nowadays. Personally, I agree with the earlier group. The bases for my view are social and rational.
From the social point, professional athletes are symbols of every nation. They are such as heroes in the eyes of teenagers. Their goals in international plays satisfy the prod of all fellow countrymen. For example in my county, IRAN, when a athlete wins a gold medal in a world competition every men speak about this success and honor for this goal. Second, these athletes are persons who are following by youth. Thus they should be perfect and for being perfect, it is necessary to concentrate on their profession. Thus they should have enough money to exercise all days and be perfect without worrying about any other things.
Rationally, the first point
that I want to consider is that, some vocations such as playing in a sport team requires certain qualities. Most athletes can play perfectly for their team about 10 years and then they should retire. Thus it is completely fair to gain more money in these sever and short period of working. Furthermore, as everyone knows, it is very likely to hurt during exercises or playings. There is a great strain on the bodies of professional athletes. So, they should be paid with high salaries. They endanger their health and put in risk their lives.
As a conclusion, and in conjunction with the above reasons, I think it is true to pay high salaries and wages to popular athletes. They are investments of any nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'for example', 'i think', 'such as', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218289085546 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.144542772861 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115044247788 0.0866891130778 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0324483775811 0.046263068375 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.070796460177 0.0685040099705 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138643067847 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0206489675516 0.0351676179071 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6391086581 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0294985250737 0.0309702414327 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0825958702065 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147492625369 0.0209618222197 70% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00589970501475 0.0139019557991 42% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1762.0 2387.08602151 74% => OK
No of words: 303.0 408.028673835 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81518151815 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320132013201 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224422442244 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151815181518 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108910891089 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6391086581 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 61.6699175238 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.4285714286 20.5533526081 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2347459217 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9047619048 120.699889404 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 20.5533526081 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 36.870815653 45.7405998639 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.52380952381 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208668836403 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.06638651526 0.103427244359 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0837707878573 0.0752933317313 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.413763139857 0.497263757937 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185214474605 0.151897553556 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768339548416 0.114077575197 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571049494545 0.0781384742642 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.189602028363 0.336927656856 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.137332967627 0.067059652881 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125912880909 0.210909579961 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509386617161 0.0618886996521 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 8.42114695341 12% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 13.6433691756 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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